Editing progression

We uploaded our rough cut version of the teen film onto Blogger during Thursday's lesson after we got feedback from Marisa. As a group we were all pleased with the feedback as it was mostly positive but just the ending of the film opening being a but unclear.  On Monday we need to get the voice over done because its a vital part as it explains the events of the opening in detail in which the audience will find useful. We also need to use motion to add in the credit openings as well as editing even further to get clean and smooth transitions throughout.