Feedback on our rough cut

On Thursday we needed to have our rough cut produced and put on the blog which we managed to do. The purpose of doing so will make it clear for us to see the progression of our teen film and also show how we as a group are able to respond to feedback. It was also a chance for Marissa to give us feedback on what we have, overall it was good feedback as she mention us having clean shots (which is down to our trusty tripod). However she did mention it being unclear on what was happening at a particular time of our teen film, this is to be made clearer when we put in the voice over which is to be recorded when all editing has been completed.